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DamiraAu
DamiraAu
Sara in Season 8
May 27 2007, 10:48 PM EDT | Post edited: May 27 2007, 10:48 PM EDT
If Jorja and CBS agree on the contract to let Sara live, *crosses fingers* this is the episode I would want to see. Long Live Sara!!!
Catherine, Greg, Nick and Warrick are ransacking Natalie's home, while Grissom is in the interrogation room with her, trying to get her to come down from her singing. Greg falters as he finds a clue that would lead him to Sara, realizing they may be to late even if the manage to get there in time. He screams to get the other's attention. Catherine reaches him first, sees the clue, reaches for her walkie talkie, calls in dispatch. Sends them to the part of the desert that is on the other side of the state. Each of them trying to figure out what to do next, their minds cluttered with details, hoping that they would reach their comrade in time. Nick and Warrick offer to stay and take care of the scene while Catherine and Greg go to the scene. The pair shoot off. Warrick picks up his cell and calls Grissom as Nick looks at the open door and a sob breaks loose from his lips. "Please don't let her die."
As the rain poors, lights and sirens appear in the distance. Sara, moving her right hand from under the car stiffens, wondering if that was all in her mind as the sound softens. But the lights are still shining, and they get closer she becomes more aware. Sara lets out a helpless child-like wail, trying to get their attention. The rain is making the dirt around her muddy and she could feel the car sinking, pressing into her back. Suddenly the noise stops all together and a warm hand grasps hers. She gasps as they pull her out, Catherine pulls her into her lap and hugs her while Greg is hovering around. Paramedics pull Sara into the ambulance and hurry to take her to the hospital.
Everyone comes to visit her, even Lindsey. Her room is full of flowers, get well cards, etc. Grissom at her side, holds her hand and kissing her forehead. "Sleep. I expect you to be at work on Monday." She chuckles.
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csifanatic333
csifanatic333
1. RE: Sara in Season 8
May 27 2007, 11:02 PM EDT | Post edited: May 27 2007, 11:02 PM EDT
wooooww thats amazing!! ...
you should write to the producers!!
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DamiraAu
DamiraAu
2. RE: Sara in Season 8
May 28 2007, 4:00 PM EDT | Post edited: May 28 2007, 4:00 PM EDT
... mehbe... does anyone know where the producers contact info is? *grins playfully* 3  out of 20 found this valuable. Do you?    
csifanatic333
csifanatic333
3. RE: Sara in Season 8
May 28 2007, 8:40 PM EDT | Post edited: May 28 2007, 8:40 PM EDT
hah no srry!!
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Dezree
4. RE: Sara in Season 8
May 28 2007, 11:42 PM EDT | Post edited: May 28 2007, 11:42 PM EDT
Love your views!!! LET SARA LIVE!!!!! CBS We ALL LOVE JORJA FOX....Fullfil her contract!! 38  out of 38 found this valuable. Do you?    
kahvitz
kahvitz
5. RE: Sara in Season 8
May 29 2007, 12:24 PM EDT | Post edited: May 29 2007, 12:24 PM EDT
"If Jorja and CBS agree on the contract to let Sara live, *crosses fingers* this is the episode I would want to see. Long Live Sara!!!
Catherine, Greg, Nick and Warrick are ransacking Natalie's home, while Grissom is in the interrogation room with her, trying to get her to come down from her singing. Greg falters as he finds a clue that would lead him to Sara, realizing they may be to late even if the manage to get there in time. He screams to get the other's attention. Catherine reaches him first, sees the clue, reaches for her walkie talkie, calls in dispatch. Sends them to the part of the desert that is on the other side of the state. Each of them trying to figure out what to do next, their minds cluttered with details, hoping that they would reach their comrade in time. Nick and Warrick offer to stay and take care of the scene while Catherine and Greg go to the scene. The pair shoot off. Warrick picks up his cell and calls Grissom as Nick looks at the open door and a sob breaks loose from his lips. "Please don't let her die."
As the rain poors, lights and sirens appear in the distance. Sara, moving her right hand from under the car stiffens, wondering if that was all in her mind as the sound softens. But the lights are still shining, and they get closer she becomes more aware. Sara lets out a helpless child-like wail, trying to get their attention. The rain is making the dirt around her muddy and she could feel the car sinking, pressing into her back. Suddenly the noise stops all together and a warm hand grasps hers. She gasps as they pull her out, Catherine pulls her into her lap and hugs her while Greg is hovering around. Paramedics pull Sara into the ambulance and hurry to take her to the hospital.
Everyone comes to visit her, even Lindsey. Her room is full of flowers, get well cards, etc. Grissom at her side, holds her hand and kissing her forehead. "Sleep. I expect you to be at work on Monday." She chuckles."
Ummm... Dont you think grissom is going to solve were she is and be the one hugging her after she is saved? not to mention she is not far from vegas because
1) Natalie cant drive
2) It was raining in both vegas and were sara is

Dont you think it would be hard for Greg and Cath to pull her out from under the car???

PS: GSR KIKS BUTT!
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DamiraAu
DamiraAu
6. RE: Sara in Season 8
May 29 2007, 3:53 PM EDT | Post edited: May 29 2007, 3:53 PM EDT
"Ummm... Dont you think grissom is going to solve were she is and be the one hugging her after she is saved? not to mention she is not far from vegas because
1) Natalie cant drive
2) It was raining in both vegas and were sara is

Dont you think it would be hard for Greg and Cath to pull her out from under the car???
"
I... didnt have enough room to actually put in how they got her out, and I think Natalie could have just gotten someone else to take the car out there like she asked Ernie Dell to deliver the package. But also I thought she could drive(?) how did she get the car back from the impound place? And I am supposing that Grissom may be occupied with Natalie and her place is closer to where she left Sara. And the rain? I only applied it to Sara cause she was the one outside. The others were inside buildings. Oh and I don't care who hugs her as long as someone gets her out. It's not perfect. *sage* i just put in the details I thought would have been perfect for the beginning of season 8. There are kinks to be fixed *sage*
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xSpedx
xSpedx
7. RE: Sara in Season 8
May 29 2007, 4:05 PM EDT | Post edited: May 29 2007, 4:05 PM EDT
Holy geezy! You should write a thing, and post it on FanFiction! I would read it!!
Any-Who...G.R.E.A.T, It made me cry, it was perfect!
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csifanatic333
csifanatic333
8. RE: Sara in Season 8
May 29 2007, 4:40 PM EDT | Post edited: May 29 2007, 4:40 PM EDT
haha yeah thats what i said!!
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oohBabyGSR
oohBabyGSR
9. RE: Sara in Season 8
May 29 2007, 5:42 PM EDT | Post edited: May 29 2007, 5:42 PM EDT
That would be AMAZING. I would LOVE for Grissom to kiss Sara! It's like, what's the point of hiding their relationship anymore? So he might as well kiss her. But I like how you didn't make it like they were making out or anything. I think their relationship should still be subtle and the show should continue to revolve around solving crimes, not realtionships. 28  out of 29 found this valuable. Do you?    
csifanatic333
csifanatic333
10. RE: Sara in Season 8
May 29 2007, 6:03 PM EDT | Post edited: May 29 2007, 6:03 PM EDT
yeah now that everyone knows they should like full on make otu in front of everyone!! ;) 23  out of 27 found this valuable. Do you?    

rhille
11. RE: Sara in Season 8
May 30 2007, 11:53 PM EDT | Post edited: May 30 2007, 11:53 PM EDT
haha yes i'd love to see them kiss, maybe even a quick peck. we haven't seen a single kiss since their relationship was revealed! 29  out of 30 found this valuable. Do you?    
CSIlover
CSIlover
12. RE: Sara in Season 8
May 31 2007, 12:48 AM EDT | Post edited: May 31 2007, 12:48 AM EDT
I must say that I am very impressed with your powerful imagination. I mean I could actually picture in my mind all that stuff actually appearing in the Season premiere. Well Done!!

I would also just like to say that I as well am a huge Sara Sidle/Jorja Fox fan, and I hope she lives.
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CSIlover
CSIlover
13. RE: Sara in Season 8
May 31 2007, 12:50 AM EDT | Post edited: May 31 2007, 12:50 AM EDT
"yeah now that everyone knows they should like full on make otu in front of everyone!! ;)"
Or Not!
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DamiraAu
DamiraAu
14. RE: Sara in Season 8
Jun 1 2007, 2:54 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 1 2007, 2:54 PM EDT
"wooooww thats amazing!! ...
you should write to the producers!!
"
Sadly found out that the CBS producers dont even come to this site to read our stuff... and that they will refuse any ideas that isnt their stuff... probally to avoid a lawsuit... but if it were up to me, heck they could use my stuff as long as I get to watch the episode.
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DamiraAu
DamiraAu
15. RE: Sara in Season 8
Jun 1 2007, 2:56 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 1 2007, 2:56 PM EDT
"I must say that I am very impressed with your powerful imagination. I mean I could actually picture in my mind all that stuff actually appearing in the Season premiere. Well Done!!

I would also just like to say that I as well am a huge Sara Sidle/Jorja Fox fan, and I hope she lives."
And... erm I could have done better. *sage* just the darn thing wouldnt let me go pass.... 2000 (I think it was?) words. And I'm glad all of you guys liked it. Hopefully the Season 8 Premere is somewhat like this... if not I wouldn't care as long as Sara lives *nod*
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§giulia§
§giulia§
16. RE: Sara in Season 8
Jun 2 2007, 4:26 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 2 2007, 4:26 AM EDT
hey DamiraAu,yours is a great story!!= )
Anyway,I think Grissom will have a little bigger role in Sara's finding.
He's interrogating Natalie,but she starts singing.He realizes that she's totally insane.It's like if she has arrived at her "insanity top"..you know,after her dad's and chloe's whole story,after Ernie Dell's death,after all those omicides..if she had had some rehab possibilities,now she's without any hopes.
Grissom realizes that he can't wait for Natalie's confession.Nobody knows where Sara is,how she is,if she's dead or alive..he can't wait just another minute.It could be too late.
Las Vegas police has just one priority : find Sara Sidle.
Cath,Nick,Greg and Warrick are trying to keep their minds lucids.Nick is the most involved one,because of his past tragical experience ("Grave Danger",of course).The stress,the tension is high,is too high,and Warrick has to calm down Nick ; say to him that he isn't helping them finding Sara,if he's so involved...he must not let the past kidnap him and bring him back to those awful hours passed in that damn death plexiglas box.
(to be continued...)
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§giulia§
§giulia§
17. RE: Sara in Season 8
Jun 2 2007, 4:28 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 2 2007, 4:28 AM EDT
to be continued...
Nick and Warrick are at the lab.They're there since they come back with Natalie and they're waiting for Grissom's directives.
Cath and Greg are with Sofia at Natalie's "office/home",working on the scene,trying to find some drawings or projects or plans of the place where Sara is.Something that could help them to find her in the desert.
Natalie is wearing her brand new orange uniform while the elicopters are flying all over the town and the desert.She can sing how long she wants to,but now she'll have a different kind of audience in jail.
Sofia finds some drawings about a car...Cath and Greg recognize the Mustang and realize that,now,they got some more clues about the area of the desert where Sara is.Natalie had drew everything about this crime,every details.She facsimiled the whole desert's area she was interested in.
Cath and Greg come back to the lab.Show the drawnings to Gil,Nick and Warrick.They ask some experts's help and they get to restrict the researches area.
All the CSI are in the desert.Two elicopters,tens and tens of police cars,cops and police dogs.
(to be continued..)
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§giulia§
§giulia§
18. RE: Sara in Season 8
Jun 2 2007, 4:28 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 2 2007, 4:28 AM EDT
to be continued...
Now we're with Grissom.He is afraid,worried,he's in confusion and lucid at the sametime.He's walking up on a little hill.He reachs the top.Now he can look beyond the hill.He sees a horrible scene.It's raining but he recognizes it.It's just like the miniature in his office.It's the horrible death scene that has constantly obsessed his mind.The red Mustang is over there,down the hill,he's watching it.
He runs down the hill.He shouts out loud the name of Sara.He shouts out loud for someone's help.
He's by her hand,now.She's not moving her hand.He calls her.He calls her,more.And more,and more.Nothing.
He's desperated(he's not crying or something like this,but he's desperated,in his "Grissom way"...you know what I mean).
Cath,Nick,Warrick,Greg,Jim and Sofia are with him now.Everyone is looking at that hand while the cops are trying to do something to take away that car from Sara.
Everyone thinks it's rain's fault ...'cos they're seeing the hand moving.SHE'S ALIVE!!!
The crane is lifting up the Mustang.
(to be continued..)
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§giulia§
§giulia§
19. RE: Sara in Season 8
Jun 2 2007, 4:30 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 2 2007, 4:30 AM EDT
to be continued...
Sara is barely visible.She's almost totally in the mud.The car has pushed her down in the mud.She must have her lungs full of water and mud.But not enough to make her stop breathing.
Sara is safe.
well...now everything gets in a second place.Sara is alive.She's in her hospital room,with Grissom.She's sleeping and he's by her side.
Nobody of their co-workers has asked Grissom something about his relationship with Sara.Most of all 'cos there wasn't the time to.Everyone,in the last hours,has had something else more important,to think about!
Anyway Grissom knows that surely something will happen.His co-workers will ask something ; they have the right to know.He will have to face Eklie,maybe the sceriff....but the worst is gone.Death is so far now.He can relax...stay by his Sara's side.Looking her sleeping,and telling her "it's all right now,dear".
well,guys...I just imagined all of this in the sametime that I was writing down this post!!= )maybe I made some logic's mistakes,I don't know!eheheh!!oh,and,surely,I made some language's mistakes!I'm sorry guys!!
I just wanted write something..but hey,my fantasy gallops when I start thinking about CSI,Sara's destiny and GSR!!!ahahah!!!
write me guys!!!
LONG LIFE TO SARA SIDLE and GSR!!
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